Comments on The Ultimate Chronicle - Part 36 by bluefish

Mostly Harmless

This is hotting up! Incredible work guys, blufish I’m glad you’ve used this to put the story on track again…

What I like about this series is that, somehow, it has struck a balance between plot and action – both are great! MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Alotar

You know what this story lacks? Mandelbrot.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
cthulhuburger

I’m not sure what is going on with Mecha-Hitler in this story, but I’ll assume that will become obvious with time. Otherwise, another great addition to the story!
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Alotar, I think Mandelbrot would be the first person used in the story who is still alive (but you can correct me if I’m wrong). But there aren’t any rules, so you should feel free to write him into the story if you want!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Alotar

Yeah, i think he would be. That is actually bad. Aaand i will not write a sequel for this, for i am incapable of writing stories of that epic proportions.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
kaellinn18

Sounds like the castle is done for. Oh well. To the Positive Zone!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
bluefish

Maybe the Mecha-Hitler fragment rusted himself from sheer fright? Maybe I just completely forgot about him in my haste to macguffin the characters back to the real world? Maybe he will surge to life at the last second and grab Lincoln’s ankle like a Hollywood villain as Lincoln steps onto the mystic pathway? Only time will tell.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
bluefish

If you have Excel, you might enjoy this. I made a visual timeline of the Ultimate Chronicle so far.

http://rapidshare.com/files/337999231/The_Ultimate_Chronicle.xls.html
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Anonymuncule

The spreadsheet is full of win.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
kaellinn18

Agreed, that spreadsheet is awesome!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5