You keep a really gritty, realistic tone throughout, and begin to explain the origin of Space Cadet’s name! A very clever piece that ties up some loose ends as well as moving the plot along – very enjoyable…
The plural if genius is genii, if you were interested, but maybe it suits the character more not to know that – your choice I suppose! Anyhoo, a lovely sequel – MH :)
Mostly Harmless
Scrawler's Secret
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