Takes a more humorous take on the plot than the original, which is what Ficly’s all about I suppose…

You’ve missed the ‘i’ in ‘with’ in your second paragraph, and you need a full stop at the very end, but other than that an interesting continuation – OK I would have liked to see the confrontation between Vince and the server, but someone can always have him turn the car back around…! MH :)

Thanks M_H, fixed the typo. Had to jiggle it around a bit to fit in the 1024

You are the master of alliteration.

I hate that online ad, too. Maybe someone should go after THEIR server with a sledge!