what was said in the office.. nice.

Great job incorporating what we heard through the secretary into this more complete back and forth. Poor guy, it doesn’t sound like they mean for him to have a comfortable, happy retirement with that last line there.

There are some internal politics going on here, methinks. But Rafferty will find a way out because he’s, well, Rafferty. I, too, thought you integrated the previous Ficly very well. Five pencils just for that.

I haven’t read the prequels to this yet, but this is a great piece by itself. The pace is excellent and the reality of the environment is gripping.

Specifically, I love it when Spence checks his notes before saying “ex-wife.”

Brilliant little moment. Agent Smith-like.

I do believe it’s spelled “realizing”
I have no other qualms with it
’cause it was GREAT
lol :P

That’s another American/British thing – we use an ‘s’ over here…! MH :)

Love it! Now the plot starts to move along!

man this is very very very well written. I really love your style.

They did not leave me much to say except well done.

Yeah British use s…and extra u’s like in color/colour =]

This is really well written – I’ve enjoyed this story so far and need to continue reading now…

I’m a brit and your spelling is fine!! wonderful piece. Your writing makes me jealous lol! Nice continuation.
Abby x