Oh, a micro-ficly. I’m not a huge fan of these, but to each their own. I’d read more to be able to comment on the story as a whole, but I don’t have time right now to link back to the beginning and go back through them all (slow browser/connection), which is the risk you run using the micro-ficly format, even though I can appreciate the technical challenge of doing these little installments in a set number of words each.

I agree with THX. Too much effort to read too few words.