Nice! This is one bad lady. I have an idea of where this should go next. I hope that I will have some time to write it later on.

I like the dual perspective this has picked up, it makes it more original methinks – but God do I love writing Rafferty…!

Lots more questions asked here, to develop the series – I’m glad it’s picked up a fan and potential contributor in kaellinn – please join in the fun! MH :)

This is a good addition to a good story line.

MORE with the children stories! I think that Really helps to add character to this lady which we don’t actually know much about. So good development :)
You’re making her an invaluable personality with that

I haven’t read the prequels, but I’m guessing she’s intercepting some package.

Love the continued use of Sesame Street code, and I’m glad I’ve seen enough of it lately to follow the idea behind which ones you’ve used. Great continuation of the intrigue, and I loved the cover story of the package being a cutesy thing from her husband.

Nice part of the story. Reading on…