Ha…the terror in the first paragraph is wonderful. I’m honestly expecting some kind of supernatural confrontation and then, BAM. Great transition to the pre-wedding fear.
My only recommendation would be to lose the last line. I feel like ending it with “I will marry her tomorrow” is such a great closer that the freedom line takes something away. But that’s just me.
Browncoatben 
Gradual Uprising {LoA} 
Rez Greetham