Nice use of imagery here. Paints a wonderful scene, and leaves the reader intrigued as to what that glow might be.

Should it be “this light is unnatural,” putting it in the present tense. Though the story is told in past tense, shouldn’t his thoughts be present tense? I’m not sure as I think it reads fine both ways.

Good point, John. Updated…

Damn, this was awesome! Great imagery, and I believe this is the first story about vikings I’ve seen here.

Also, I can’t believe I haven’t followed you yet. This has been rectified.

Thanks Kaellinn…very kind words.

Oh wow, kaellinn’s rights this is the first of it’s kind as far as I know… And executed beautifully!

From imagery to plot potential, you’ve set up yourself or another brave writer with a cracking bit of storytelling – good work! MH :)

Lovely, evocative, and contemplative beginning to what sounds like a brutal war epic. Really liked the tone and setting here.

Love these, BCB. Bring me moar.

nice set up, with great imagery and details in his thoughts.

This was nominated for the ficly book.

Jimeny…I’m on a roll! Thanks Elsha!