Comments on Bystanding by Gradual Uprising {LoA}

Gradual Uprising {LoA}

All of this is 100% true.
A genuine letter from me to you.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mostly Harmless

Considering this is true fact, it’s great that you’ve made it so readable, where it could have been self-centred and meaningless, it has some bigger themes in there about city, life, even revision techniques!?

I would reccommend capitalising the starts of your sentences even on the list of transport methods however, being a grammar freak… Good work, nice piece. MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mr.Gabriel

The city is amazing.

Small towns are for small people.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Real Estate Writer

Two wins I’m impressed and proud.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

ha I didn’t know I won. :) thnx
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Lighty

I love the casual feeling of this even within the smoothness of the writing. My favourite bit is the list of transport, I’m not quite sure why, it just is. The last two lines of that paragraph especially.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5