Ok I love the twist to this. It’s a very interesting take on the challenge.

I agree, well done with the challenge.

Why do I get the image of the Hulkster when I read this? Did you have professional wrestling in mind, or is that just conjecture on my part.

Fantastic play on the challenge, and a very well drawn out character. I can totally feel Alan’s sorrow. Well done.

I love how you interpreted the challenge for this story. You really made me connect with this guy emotionally as he went on for his last show.

Very cool take. This makes me want to watch Incredibles all of the sudden.

Love the set up. The build gets better and better from super-evil laugh to chain-smoker.
Not as crazy about the finish, but the trip was good.

This story is amazing. You manage to get the emotion in there, the bitterness, and it really makes the story.

Old superheros die hard, I do hope they know…

I really identified with the poor slob looking bad in the mirror – that seems to happen to me way too often these days :-)

Very colourfully told, I felt like I was there.

wow way to go all out i loved it.

Great little story. Nice job staying inside his actor’s head, in character and all that, right up until the end. Or maybe I’ve just been watching too many Batman cartoons lately. Fun stuff.

this was incredible! I almost judged it too fast and then you changed everything! Kudos

Bravo. Its all been said. Congrats on the feature.

I love this. Comic, yet you still pull off the tragedy with finesse. I wish I would have written this!

This kinda reminded me of Doctor Horrible’s Sing Along Blog (it’s a musical).

I was really stunned by the twist at the end…I certainly wasn’t expecting it but you pulled it off really well.

I had a connection to the musical [title of show] to add, but I lost it…maybe I’ll remember later. =]

This is awesome. ’Nuff said!

Someday_93- I love Doctor Horrible’s Sing Along Blog!

Hey good idea. Nice write too…
Abby x