What a twist! A brilliant piece of storytelling here, it should almost be subtitled ‘The Thrillseekers Guide to Suicide’ – which also rhymes…
Light-hearted, which creates some strong contrasts, and clever because it creates the image of a superhero character before reminding us that humans are NOT invincible, and that actions have consequences…
I find the sense of freedom interesting, especially as at the end, the person looses the freedom to live. It was slightly confusing with no mention of stairs, but the ending solved that mystery. Fantastic entry!
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