Ha, particularly liked the bit with the customs official… Lots of unanswered questions and an interesting central character, even if I do wish we could have had a slightly more comprehensive introduction.

A couple of spelling things – ‘somewhat’ and ‘fluorescent’ – I think you’re missing a ‘the’ before ‘interior’ in the second paragraph as well.

But a nice set-up, that, as mentioned above, picks up towards the end… MH :)

intrigue early on.. :)

I’ve traced my way back to here after finding the latest installment. The set-up so far is excellent – sparse and yet structured with details that lend themselves easily to letting imagination fill in the rest. This should be good.

Good set-up. I like the immediate feeling of law in the larger picture with lawlessness simmering just below the surface.
Is giving our protagonist the name of an avenging angel a sign of things to come?

I didn’t know his was the name of an avenging angel. Are you refering to the mormon avenging angels in Utah or something more biblical?

Well, I clicked on your most recent entry (“VX”, I think), not expecting to spend two minutes clicking on prequels! Now, of course, I’m obligated to read it all. I hope you’re happy.

I like how he qualified the job: Not enthusiastic about following the law, but nothing illegal, just open to interpretation.