Wow…loved this.

The western feel is so real here. This felt like a scene from Silverado to me. It’s just so real and believable.

Only note would be in the final line. I think you meant to say “But I aim to take as many…”

Glad you liked it!

Thanks for catching that. Fixed.

Classic Western drama here and nicely done. I like all the questions left unanswered…really gets the mind going.