Disclaimer: Before anyone says anything – I know it’s pointless. I know it doesn’t have a story, and I know it’s not written well. I’m just writing to write ’cause I need a distraction, so please understand this and be nice?

oh this was good, look writers write, plumbers plumb poets poe that is, how it is, don’t ever apalogize for that.

I thought it was cute actually, just a little piece, like an ode to blue in a random terms. Worked for me just fine.

I disagree with you, someday. This was very good and it did have a story. My only criticism is that the summary line at the end is not necessary.

poets poe? that made me giggle =]

thanks guys!

i dont think its rubbish and it does have a story. and its true poets poe =P

It was a story told in reverse, mostly, and it was effective. :) Way to scribble something down so we can call it art!

I liked it, not just because blue is my favorite color, but because you really made me empathize with this poor girl. Good job!

poetry, folk music.