Obviously I won’t win my own contest, but I wanted to try it.

That was brutal. I liked the whole rise and fall and rise of despair that you achieved here.

Wow, this was epic. Amazingly told.

This was great! The end, though sad, was amazing.

I enjoyed the story, even as stark as it is. Don’t quite get this sentence The men were the last, just if you were to test beer on us, but it doesn’t affect the overall concept.

men would die last because of the shear bulk of men, just as beer and alcohol has less effect on us than on women

wow, with the constraints of the challenge, you successfully completed the massive job of creating a huge problem and solving it in such a final way.