THX 0477

Frightening with a slightly disjointed feeling, probably cause of all the details left unsaid. I like the idea of the simultaneous safety and danger of both the light and the dark.
A few missteps early, like the fragment at the end of the first paragraph and the two prepositions at the beginning of the second (…out down…), but overall had a nice, taut feel to it.

• Posted almost 10 years ago.