Wow! This leaves a lot of stuff unanswered, but it still feels satisfying, somehow – probably because sheer originality is holding it together like magic glue…

A really clever, cyncical, creepy and classy piece of writing with plentiful room for sequels – I still can’t pin it down, bit I loved this. Good work – MH :)

Huge fan of the “non sequitur interjections of philosophy.” And this definitely sets up for something very big.

Bravo on mixing the foreboding doom with humor. Well done.

And welcome back, if this is the same Eckhouse from Ficlets. http://ficlets.ficly.com/authors/eckhouse

Thanks for the comments. And yes, same old Eckhouse. I unfortunately still look just like the man in real life.

Very cool setting and feel to it. I really like the small focus on this one person’s experience in the car with something familiar, a car crash, with all the larger, more fantastical details thrown in around that.

p.s. Great to have you back amongst us!

nice setting with a very cool spooky chill to it. Very nicely done.
Welcome home
Abby x

Wonderful storytelling. Nicely flowing narrative and a gripping setup. I’d love to see where it goes from here, but I’m not going to be the one to write the sequel. :)