This is good. I bit hard to read, but I like the miss-understanding between the two, and that the girl who doesn’t understand the slang has her own slang (like whatever).

this definitely gains something in the addition of the (unsaid). what you added outside of the quotations. kudos.

so good. I think I have had this conversation before.

Ha! Sharp comedy here, hard to read in places, but successful on the whole – good work. Really nice characterisation, and a strong title which is good to see…

Well done – MH :)

HAHA!

I cracked up everytime she said like.

congrats