Hoist by his own petard! Sort of. I like the inversion of scorned man as opposed to woman, and especially the added twist of guilt he’ll lay on her. The writing itself is without flaw, with room for very minor tightening. I like it more with each reading.

Amazing! Well written, entertaining and had me on the edge of my seat.

A lovely interpretation of the challenge with a well-constructed twist at the end…

I did get a little confused with all the names, but I’m not sure there’s much you can do about that – when I concentrated more as I read it was OK so I’m sure it was just me!

Anyhoo, good work here and thanks for entering – MH :)

And the prop manager fights back! or someone with access to the props. Very nicely done.

Wow, this is great! I love the twist at the end.