I know this story can be a bit cliched. But I can honestly say I have not seen this done before other than Dexter, which was sort of it’s inspiration, in concept only. It’s main inspiration was the TV show Castle which I love! I have not seen Dexter yet but after hearing good things I may try it. Who knows it could help spawn some sequels.

Nicely macabre. ;-)

Thank you!

Very good, reminds me a lot of a story I wrote a while back:

http://ficly.com/stories/9295

I only post the link because you might be interested, not because I’m plugging my own stuff…

Anyhoo, you did catch me out and the ending was very good – the dialogue is strong and Seth is the perfect name for this guy, sounds all serpent-y and sly!

Well done – MH :)

This was cool. Nice speech and clever characters. Confused as to where the name came from. Probably something beyond my mental capacity.
Good one
Abby x

Thank you! I was actually very happy with this story. Oh and MH I will read the story and let you know what I think.