Always a good sign when the second installment (or first, depending on whether or not you consider the prequel a foreword) ups the ante. Great details that are subtle but strong, and a compelling story to boot. Please keep going!
dot dot dot. Looking forward to the next part. Good writing although you are always a little limited writing first person. For example we know that “I” can’t die unless you switch to present by having him/her writing their thoughts down sometimes.
Right. Well I must say I was expecting to be thrown in at the deep end with a car chase or something, but then again you did say we’d have to patient, so patient I shall be.
Family issues are always a good, if slightly clichéd place to start, they provide a catalyst for isolating the character, or at the least putting them in an unfamiliar environment…
Eckhouse 
Abby (LoA) 
Mostly Harmless