Oh, so was he driving the car? It’s kind of unclear as to what the ‘bubbles’ are.
But it is well written and I love the description.

they are floaters. i put floaters in the first sentence, and then changed it to bubbles for the rest of the story so that I wouldn’t be constantly repeating the word floaters

I got the floaters, but envisioned a boy in the back seat of a car – perhaps using windscreen instead of window might make the fact that he’s driving more obvious?

Still, the idea is good – the reference to the fact that he’s writing this down tells us that he must survive, so there’s a nice sequel opportunity right there…

Nice work! MH :)

Second word, I believe should be didn’t, but maybe that’s just me.

Car crashes are horrbile. D:

I kind of want you to imagine a young kid in the backseat, and then change your image with the car crash. I guess I didn’t make a clear enough transition. I got the floaters too

I did some editing, hope it’s a bit clearer.

I like the edit, it’s clearer and very good. Some people just never grow up.

thnx XD

I used to do the same thing with my floaters!

Em, what are floaters???

The little squiggly lines you see in your vision. I think they’re things caught in your eye fluid? But don’t quote me on that.

So happy to know I’m not the only one!!! Haha I loved jumping things with my floaters!!! (Secretly still do) But only when I’m not driving. :)

Sadly, I don’t see nearly as many floaters as I used to. :( But when I do, the games start!

:)

oh my..had never heard the term floaters outside of nasty emissions jokes..
but similarly,
I used to just imagine something was skating on the power lines.. And when those stopped, it flew..
yeah, doing that while driving is not good.

Ive never had these “floaters”. Usually if something gets in my eyes, it’s out in seconds! Although, like Elsha, I like to imagine myself sliding along the power lines, and also those wall thingies at the side of motorways.

I’m really liking this whole group glimpse at our childhoods. And from it I draw one conclusion.

All good writers start as children chasing fantasy through car windows.

Challenging siblings to racing raindrops down the window pane.

I second that! My sister and I used to do that all the time.

Nice idea but a little vague and foggy. Still, describes teenage drive well (drive – geddit. Oh never mind)
Well done.
Abby x

The scariest thing I’ve experienced is a car accident. You can’t imagine the power and force of metal hitting metal even at slow speeds. As a nurse working in a trauma unit at a hospital I can tell you that is one place you don’t want to find yourself. Driving is serious and the number one killer of teenagers. Say “No” to driving as long as you can

Haven’t seen my floaters for a long time. They used to look like lines of print, made up mostly of o’s. I used to try to read them, but the part you focused on always slid away to the side immediately, so you couldn’t.

Look at the conversation you’ve caused! You should be proud.
You should also be proud of this writing-it’s gorgeous.