Right. I’m not going to tell you what and what not to write, but posting the equivalent of a facebook status update as a story isn’t my idea of a thrilling read.

If you insist, then at least get your spelling and grammar right – please? MH :)

Ed said it all.

Please.

this reads like it is written by a non-native English speaker. Nothing against foreigners, however, as a story this one is missing a beginning and a middle and details.