This is part of a larger work-in-progress, titled “Everything that Never Happened”.
Very intriguing. I found it a teeny bit hard to follow but when I went back and checked over it was all good. Seems fine technically, and you get the feeling that it’s very much going somewhere creatively… Nice start. MH :)
Very intriguing. I found it a teeny bit hard to follow but when I went back and checked over it was all good.
Seems fine technically, and you get the feeling that it’s very much going somewhere creatively… Nice start. MH :)
Aargh wrong rating.
Pat J 
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