I actually find the character of her mum desperately sad, very, very well characterised indeed.

Finding this new plotline a really good move Gabe, I’m interested to see how you write the father character… An opposite to the mother would be interesting, rather than an abusive stereotype – perhaps he could even be stepping towards her to cover her up and convince his wife she was imagining things.

Just a thought.

Either way, nice continuation – MH :)

ooh ::bites fingernails:: this is a good continuation, it has a still excitement to it. I’ve been curious about her parents for a while, so it’s nice to see them have a part in the story.
I haven’t been able to read or write here recently, but I try to find at least five minutes to check out this story. Good job! =)

Revealing the characters of the mother and father was a wonderful change, and I’m intrigued with Stacy’s obedience with her parents, seeing as she doesn’t seem the type to follow her parent’s instructions… will this be explained? Please continue!!

Lie, lie and lie some more. “So I got fat? Leave me alone!”

I love it! More :)

baby bump is not to be confused with fat.

She can’t be showing already?!