awesome beginning! I think you have done this ficly in reverse series justice! My fave line: The truth of it was, sex does not equal romance.

I’m no good at compliments. Thanks Elsha, with sequels all I worry about is ruining the story.

oh i cant’ take compliments either. :)

Yay, the CD has returned. I wonder who’s going to let us in on the secret contents of that disc?

You did a fantastic job of bringing the most of the story elements together. Jenni and I kind of took it on a daytime soap path, but you’ve brought back some of the mystery that BCB started/ended with.

And the note about Julia’s number still being listed as “home” in his address book is very cool. I’m going to grab a shovel, because I can totally dig it.

Reading the other entries, I had a distinct feeling about Jamie that I was hoping to portray.

And I want to know about the CD, so that’s why I brought it back.

I’m a little confused about the use of italics but I haven’t read the rest of the series. This was a great story. Woah…how to get your character limit’s worth dude. I can hardly believe that it’s only 1024 characters.
Well done indeed.
Abby x

THE CD IS DOOM!!!

maybe…dunno yet.

Great piece here! My favorite in the series so far. Great pace and flow to the whole thing and, agreeing with John, it really brought back the mystery.

Nicely done!

Oh yay! I didn’t ruin it!

I can’t wait for the next entry now! Someone get hot! :)