‘The organs would…’ might sound better as ‘their organs would’
fixed it!
Ew. Getting livers for a living?
haha! you’re funny gabe, but yes.
Nice place in the story to add some context, it tells us just enough, but still makes me want to read on! The pace of this story is perfect, really solid storytelling throughout. More good work – MH :)
Nice place in the story to add some context, it tells us just enough, but still makes me want to read on! The pace of this story is perfect, really solid storytelling throughout.
More good work – MH :)
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