Beautiful.

One of my favorite songs.

This is just an opinion thing, totally up to you, but I feel like this would sound better in the past rather than present tense.

You can feel this girl’s angst, wanting this boy to notice her…I think we’ve all felt that at some point, and you captured that really well. Great job!

TAYLOR SWIFT!!!!!!! YAY! Love this song! Well done on bringing it to life!

Stupid slut. He needs to dump her and date the girl he belongs with!
I like the line about writing endless love letters to him.
You spelled definitely wrong in the last line. I do it all the time too:)
Excellent Job!

Ah, classic high school. Definitely put the song into narrative form well.