Blimey talk about throwing us in at the deep end! I like that Dominic didn’t get a formal introduction, his actions spoke for themselves – and boy, did they speak!

Brilliant dialogue, great description, and of course a nice little hook at the end, which took away from the standalone character study a bit for me, but obviously makes sequels more likely / easier.

I enjoyed it – an example of good ‘mature’ writing I think, sometimes that tag can make people overload on language and vulgarity if you ask me… Anyhoo, well done – MH :)

Wow. This left me breathless…

I was a bit confused by the word muzzle at the beginning, I was thinking of a dog…but that’s probably just my lack of gun knowledge for you (which let me just say I am not ashamed of) =]

The descriptions were amazing and dialogue spot on. Nice work!

Brutal and disturbing. Anti-heroes can be tough write. It could be interesting to see where all this goes. Lots of little hints dropped without being too terribly obvious about it.