livid and insane! But the title says it all, so I’m just hanging on for the ride!

Aaaaargh! Scary guy, obsessive (note to self: don’t let fellow ficleteers observe my interactions with barrista reviewers…)

Only joking, great dialogue, fab characterisation – MH :)

Yep, here comes teh crazy. Nice job letting his insanity start slipping out more and more, the warped point of view from which he is approaching the whole situation.

I really enjoy the subject of this story, it’s like a catchy song, I want more :)