Powerful and I love the detail..

Really good structure with this – I don’t know whether the ‘level’ system is an actual American thing, or whether you’ve created your own system – either way it’s interesting and engaging.

I like the drip-feed of information particularly, climaxing in the actual reveal of the crime…

Thanks for entering! MH :)

It is an actual American thing…present in Juvy Hall and the Psych ward =]

Nice take on the challenge. Loved the ending. It invites a sequel.

I like the piece and I like the opening. It is interesting comparing County Corrections Orange to traffic cones.