I felt the ending was a little rushed, and let the rest of the piece down a bit, but nonetheless you’ve constructed an interesting relationship and played with it…

Nice entry – MH :)

I changed the ending, but it says the same thing.
As far as a challenge entry, I doubt Drew is such a rebel. :)

great advice yoda! I was really struggling with that as well. :)

I would’ve ditched her too.

Hate boring people.

And for the rushed part. Hello? Have you read the challenge, besides 1024 characters has to go somewhere.

Great edit, I don’t think I meant the ending was rushed, I meant lacking…

The ending doesn’t lack now, it’s much more lively, vibrant and suggestive – good work, MH :)

Haha this is great!

(Not how I spent my weekend)

but great! The funniest part though is that people like Lucia don’t exist here. I have fully visited almost every club that Valencia has to offer. (and gotten completely blasted) yes, my mom knows, don’t worry if she sees this

haha- side note; well researched! I have done everything that Lucia’s parents want me to do.

BTW my host bro’s name is Miquel :)

Congrats on the win! This totally represents the exchange student experience here, though didn’t really reflect my weekend.

:) well deserved.

well, I just made up something based on what I think my friend would have done on his foreign exchange experience. :)

you don’t know how bubbly warm your words made me feel! FRIEND!!!!

thanks friend.

good story, I also would have ditched this girl, I have done similar things when attempting to avoid ex girlfriends