Comments on Gone Sour by Mostly Harmless

Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Hehe I love how all the descriptions are in candies.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Chrys W

Really like how wonderfully descriptive this story is.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Nathaniel Payne

Flaming Hecate! How do you expect me to follow something like this? I have no doorway to the inner trappings of your mind, good sir! You dally in miracles where I deal mostly in snake oil.

I am at once retreating back to mundane Mr Cavendish. Only his harmless banality can save me now.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

oh wow, MH, this was divine!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
kaellinn18

Jebus, Ed. You’re far too young to write this well. Save something for your twenties!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

Incredible. This proves just how amazing a story can unfold. I’m in love!! Keep writing!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Paige Elizabeth

Willy Wonka’s seemy underworld. I can’t wait to read more.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
THX 0477

Bizarre and silly but all deftly done. Ominous too, which is hard to do when your subject is candy.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Lone Writer

THE NINTH CANDY?!
LE GASP!
I love this, its like a delicious twist on Willy Wonka. MWAHA!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Catherine

This whole series is awesome. I’m really craving candy at the moment…..
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Marli

Here Catherine,have some of mine.(early Easter chocolates) Better on your lips than on my hips. (quote is intellectual copywrite.lol. Good Job as usual M.H.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Bella

It’s wonderful. Wow…
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5