Well you didn’t convince me but it was a good effort… I’m not sure about the free-verse all the way through, but I enjoyed it for the content – lots of little things you picked up on and got the reader to think about.
I have the Indiana Jones theme tune stuck in my head now – God bless John Williams eh? MH :)
You’ve proven the majesty of nature, and that humans, as a species are creative and highly evolved. Also, that for evolutionary reasons, many species work together for a common goal.
As an argument, this has failed miserably. Good arguments posit opposing views, and counter them. This is just a list of things you happen to find neat about the natural world.