Comments on Last Weekend Together by Horrorfan13

Horrorfan13

I hope you aren’t doing this, but I couldn’t resist.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Ruby Slippers

Haha. Love how this fits into the challenge.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Abby (LoA)

that was amazing and completely unexpected. Not sure what the challenge was so this comment might be irrelevant. Maybe you could split it into short paragraphs where you’ve started new lines.

Everything seemed so romantic then: BANG!
Never mind. Wonderful work,
Abby x
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Marli

I was so sure he was a drug courier.
The ending was a good twist.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

This is exactly how I spent my weekend!!! incredible!

a few minor details different

for instance that I’m a 16-year-old single boy who doesn’t know the criminals of spain, but other than that 100% on the money!

Haha, I really liked this entry! I’m gonna struggle not giving this the win…
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

haha, my fave part was the mention of the "bible drawer’ because we all know what that is. lol. love it!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Yay! Something violent.
Love violence.
And it’s a bit like Lenny at the end of Of Mice and Men.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
kaellinn18

Hahaha five pencils for how this fit into the challenge. Awesome!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Horrorfan13

blushing Thanks all!
@GU-I knew it!!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.