yes, those are the questions.. I hope you have the answers. :) Willie should be chasing her, she is running to his house and she just said she had the same last name.. just my feel for this.
Wow you pushed this into first gear! This is good stuff, you don’t lose atmosphere at the introduction of a clearer plot which is nice… I just think it’ll be important, how you deal with Sarah emotionally now – she can’t get all inquisitive and intrepid straight away – reading on! MH :)