mhm, the smell. ew. kind of an anticlimactic ending though. Not very happy about that. setting, action, emotion, all great, but the ending.. she left. I feel there should be a moral, or a twist, or a sense of satisfaction, but there is not.
To be honest I was struggling with the ending. To be even more honest, this is all a true story, it happened to me a few weeks ago. This exact situation. thanks for reading tho.
ElshaHawk (LoA) 
Andy G {L.O.E.M.A.T.T.L.O.A.}