Thanks for the comment! You are correct, it was D-Day.

I would love it if someone continued this. If no one does, I’ll definitely do it myself at some point in the future. I think this one has potential.

Potential indeed – that is one HELL of a starter story!

It was the tazer line that really pulled me into this one, that’s where the good stuff started – and then doesn’t stop… Nice little details and characterisation snippets to add some depth and an almost double-take worthy finale with the birth/death dates.

Great work! MH :)

I hate time travel…

this was nominated for the ficly book.