As I have said numerous times before, I am not fit to comment on poetry, but when you read something that grabs you and draws you in, who are you to decline from commenting?
I really enjoyed this, it had some nice subtle punnery in there, and the imagery came across really well – swelling love to the magnitude of the universe was quite a bold move but I think it works well thematically…
Apologies, but I really can’t offer criticism on a technical level, but with regards to creative content I was impressed – MH :)
A lustrous thing … lustrous is a beautiful word, beautifully set off here… and of course you have even taken it into your name — or is that just the English version of luster? (joke). I will rate in relation to your other poems, later, when I have read them all.
Mostly Harmless
LaraLustre
mora
Gurth