Ah, the perils of living and loving. Nice twist.

wow! This is incredible…im actually killing myself writing this rather than reading the scarecrow

This has a deeper moral and context than the ‘Lion’ installment, and I think it’s better for it…

That last paragraph was a stunner, and the last line was perfect – good work – MH :)

Man, the wizard is in some trouble. If he ever came back, that is.

Your stories show a wealth of knowledge and wisdom for one so young. You must read a very great deal. I particularly liked this piece.

awesome! perfect ending.