Nice :-)
Lines 1 – 6 were good. Lines 7 – end were fantastic, really thoughtful, and you tie up the ‘picture’ analogy neatly and creatively… Short, simple, sweet, I enjoyed it – sometimes poetry can tell what ten stories would make sound contrived and cliché – I’m envious! MH :)
Lines 1 – 6 were good. Lines 7 – end were fantastic, really thoughtful, and you tie up the ‘picture’ analogy neatly and creatively…
Short, simple, sweet, I enjoyed it – sometimes poetry can tell what ten stories would make sound contrived and cliché – I’m envious! MH :)
short and to the point. i love it sis!
short and to the point yet getting the point across in the process i love it
Paige Elizabeth 
Mostly Harmless 
.:Band Baby:. 
Moonlightgirl Paige Elizabeth Mostly Harmless .:Band Baby:. Moonlightgirl