This captures really well the little kid mentality. I love the worldly little girl who acts like she knows everything because she knows marginally more than the other two. It’s so true. The last line made me chuckle. Oh! and Tanner, how suddenly he’s perfectly happy being the baby when faced with the prospect of cooties. Really well written, and you manage to keep the dialogue clear which can be hard with multiple characters and little else.
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Paige Elizabeth
Lighty