Short, but sweet! That was some great imagery, and I liked it!

Short and sweet. The definition of a ficly/et.

I like it. Nice flow of syllables/beats as well.

you know how to word things so perfectly that even a poem as short as this is as powerful as a lengthy one.

How awesome is this?

My Dishonest Heart is a great title for a song too….whoooo….maybe you’ve inspired me!