Now it’s sequeled to the correct part.

Ohhh! Jessica has history with the proprietor as well!

Can’t wait to see where this is heading. I’d write a sequel myself but I’m having the worst case of writer’s block.

Yeah, I really couldn’t express what they have in common right now so I’m eagerly awaiting a sequel!

I liked this new character, the bartender can have endless possibilities.

I want to sequel, but I have no way to go about it. I’ll have a little think….

Well done! This is better than my addition! My only gripe is you’re missing some commas, but still. Great story!

I live by what my 4th grade english teacher said about commas: “When in doubt, leave it out!”

Guess I’ll have to break out the red pen this weekend, huh?

P.S. For those of wondering, jcain is my uncle that lives right next door to me. So now, my previous comment isn’t nearly as creepy.

By the way we have got to get you an avatar this weekend. I’m tired of staring at the big circle F

This story is made ever more precious by yet another ficly-family relation.

I feel like sequel’ing, but should probably wait more time since the first…take it from here PJ…you can do it!

Same here, Grad. I want to sequel, but shouldn’t.

I think PJ should sequel.

Me too!

Oh no the pressure is too much!
Head explodes
I will think about it all through RS tomorrow and hopefull come up with something relevant… :S