Brilliant. This takes the motivation of the first installment, the action of the second, and combines them in perfect measure!
Although I’m not sure whether he’s actually trying to get his Princess back, or just kill lots of beautiful young women to make himself feel better, the descriptions here were really effective all the way through.
After the semi-colon in the last line, you either need to uncapitalise ‘she’, or replace with a full stop, but other than that this was strong technically and creatively – a proper 5-pencil story! MH :)
Mostly Harmless