Nicely continued. Well done. The last line made me laugh.
Good job,
Abby x

No honor among thieves? Well done.

The shadowy thief’s dialogue is absolutely perfect – makes us wonder what he knows that our wily anti-heroin doesn’t!

As above, brilliant detailing of the situation, and I always marvel at how you use such a sophisticated vocabulary in a way that doesn’t alienate your readers – it all fits perfectly together and is really readable… MH :)

This was a beautiful continuation of this storyline. The tripping of the alarm on the way out is the perfect ending. These two thieves could have some real chemistry if this series keeps going.

“Professional courtesy be damned.” Beautiful! :)

I would’ve tripped it too, haha. Damn common thieves always trying to steal your thunder.

Awesome sequel, and the alarm is perfect!