Comments on Fooling by Brebelles {LoA}

someday_93

Very, very intense. I began reading this thinking it was about a boyfriend, but the tag “family” led me to believe maybe not, I suppose it could work for either. Really powerful.

Writing is an awesome outlet, so get those feelings out there! =]
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Brebelles {LoA}

Hah, to be specific, It’s about a cousin. :P
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
In Night's Arms

Wow, yeah I was going “Wow your boyfriend sucks” lol ;)
I like it, but you never rhyme that I can see, makes me sad a little bit. Anyway…I like it.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 3 out of 5
Brebelles {LoA}

My boyfriend does suck. :P JayKay.

It wasn’t MEANT to ryhme.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
In Night's Arms

Yeah I know it wasn’t, but you know how I feel about poems that don’t rhyme =p
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 3 out of 5
Brebelles {LoA}

uh… no I dont
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
In Night's Arms

As a general rule I disapprove. Thus, almost all of my poems rhyme =p
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 3 out of 5