Need an apostrophe in Michael (’)s. I suspect you are saving on characters this way! I like that you do not go into heavy gory detail, but still get the violence across.

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24 hours to make some bombs and get out of doge, or find michael’s files and the money, or be swept into other dealings that will distract him from this deal and make his life more stressful. Either way, a great read.

Another well-executed twist.