My husband and I frequented lots of these bars in America. Barflys or nighthawks would have been my guess but Charlie put me right. Consistant good story writing. I like the way you weave yourself into the story.
Nicely done…believe it or not, this painting was what started this challenge. My English teacher last year had us read a story about this painting and then we had to write our own stories about other paintings. Good take on it.