I’m really happy that this focuses on life rather than death – that it’s sweet and innocent not deep and tinged with sorrow…

A lovely bit of storytelling, the six year old is wonderfully cute, and the pillow fortress a stroke of brilliance – I think you mean ‘softly firm’ without the comma when describing the adult voice, but other than that, technically strong and creatively interesting -well done! MH :)

This was sweet. Definitely a different take on the challenge than everyone else! It was refreshing not to read a story that focused on dieing but rather the bucket list. Excellent Entry!